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咲くその木
春風に舞う
緩めた手
抱きしめ止めた
探しても無駄

Saku sono ki
Harukaze ni mau
Yurumeta te
Dakishime tometa
Sagashitemo muda

This blooming tree
Dancing in the spring wind
The hand I've loosened
Ceased to embrace me
It's futile even if I search for it
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Given 2014-07-04
Spring is a season of growth, yet this is not what we sense in Te by ZetsubouDahlia.  This tanka is ripe with the symbolism shared between a fruitless friendship and an overreaching tree; from tree limbs to our own arms. ( Suggested by Nichrysalis and Featured by GrimFace242 )
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blackoutpoet Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely work and very well thought out ... congrats on the DD!
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scaredlittlewitch Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student Filmographer
あなたの詩は方法で私に関するものであり、私はそれが好きです。
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ZetsubouDahlia Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
ありがとうございます。
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PanzerFlight Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
...I could taste the over-rated from a mile away...
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Lady-Weavile-461 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Simply beautiful! :D
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naikki Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Beautiful flow and imagery!
Just a typo in the english version..it should be "...I've loosened"
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:iconzetsuboudahlia:
Thank you, I corrected it :)
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Wyvern-1 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
There's something about Japanese lyrics, rhymes, and others that just...it's just surreal and indescribable. I just love seeing and hearing it. :)
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ZetsubouDahlia Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
I agree :) Japanese is a beautiful language.
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captivityisevil Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
love it
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