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あの丘で
紙で作った
飛行機は
桜に落ちた
探している子

Ano oka de
Kami de tsukutta
Hikouki wa
Sakura ni ochita
Sagashiteiru ko

On that hill
A paper-made
Air-plane
Fell in the cherry blossoms
A searching child
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Given 2013-08-20
~ZetsubouDahlia captures a lovely image in his tanka, Ano oka de ( Featured by Nichrysalis )
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MikuXSonikkuFangirl Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kawwaii desu!
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Colorful--Melody Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
very cute <3
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fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kono-wa totemo kirei desu-yo~
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er49563 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student General Artist
reminds me of that one pikmin song.  lovely 
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fujoshifan43 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Lovely

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Mosspetal Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty! :) It makes me think of that new Ghibli film coming out. The Wind Rises I believe it's called? Very nice poem!
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ZetsubouDahlia Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
Haha, I'm not really up to date with movies lately, but I'm glad :) Thanks :D
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Mosspetal Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!! ^^
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KevinPSB4 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Nice.
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HalfEarth Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Isn't this format a predecessor of haiku?
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