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叫ぶばら
汚い景色
遠い海
朱に染まって
きれいになった

Sakebu bara
Kitanai keshiki
Tooi umi
Ake ni somatte
Kirei ni natta

A shouting rose
Dirty scenery
A distant sea
Covered in blood
Became beautiful
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That last line is such a surprise.
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moonheartstar123 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
nice
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ersatzteilh Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Photographer
I love your poem . " a distant sea covered in blood "
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Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
this is really nice, the whole poem really make the last line stand out
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